English 101: The Process Analysis Essay Continued Further

Summary

Highlights

• James Boswell discusses effective essay writing strategies, using stress reduction as an essay topic. 📑
• He explains the importance of structure and transitional sentences in process analysis essays. 📚
• Boswell illustrates essay components through a student's paper about managing stress with diet and mindset. 🥦😌
• The lecture covers multi-dimensional approaches to crafting engaging and informative essays. ✨
• Vivid descriptions in essays like leaves changing color can make complex topics more relatable. 🍁

Key Takeaways

• Always use transition words to guide your readers smoothly through the essay. 🎨
• Clarity and structure in writing prevent reader confusion and enhance understanding. ✍️
• Illustrate points with examples to effectively engage your audience. 🌟
• Revise and edit for proper formatting – don't forget to double space! 📝
• Approach stressful topics like writing with strategies to manage and reduce stress. 🧘‍♂️
• Use colorful descriptions and relatable themes to make essays more engaging. 🍂

Overview

Chapters

• 00:00 - 00:30: Introduction to the Process Analysis Essay The chapter discusses the fundamentals of writing a Process Analysis Essay. The speaker begins by mentioning their preference against one-word titles, but acknowledges that sometimes they can be effective, as illustrated by the use of an exclamation point in a title.
• 00:30 - 01:00: Understanding Parts of Speech and Sentence Construction The chapter focuses on understanding parts of speech with an emphasis on interjections, which are complete thoughts in a sentence. It mentions learning all parts of speech and different types of sentences. The concept of stress and interjection is defined, and there's a note about revisiting a previous class's ending points to guide paper-writing discussions. The chapter seems to aim at helping generate ideas for writing assignments.
• 01:00 - 01:30: Managing Stress Through Essay Writing The chapter discusses the importance of managing stress through essay writing and provides practical tips to alleviate stress. It emphasizes the significance of adhering to guidelines such as double-spacing in essays for better readability and feedback. Moreover, the chapter suggests that modifications in diet, mental outlook, and lifestyle can contribute significantly to stress relief, but warns about the deadly effects of excessive stress.
• 01:30 - 02:00: Effective Essay Structuring Techniques The chapter discusses effective techniques for structuring essays. It begins by addressing the common issue of stress, particularly the stress associated with essay writing. While not delving into the types of stress, the focus is on managing stress efficiently, much like managing time.
• 02:00 - 02:30: Using Attention Getters in Essays This chapter explores the use of attention getters in essays. It highlights the importance of using transitional topic sentences to maintain a positive attitude and lower stress. The chapter emphasizes the necessity of incorporating at least five transitional words to enhance essay coherence. Finally, it suggests that altering a person's lifestyle can reduce unwanted stress and discusses the significance of restating main points in the conclusion.
• 02:30 - 03:00: Incorporating Quotes and Definitions The chapter "Incorporating Quotes and Definitions" discusses how adjusting one's diet, mental outlook, and lifestyle can reduce stress significantly, despite initial misery caused by high stress levels. The narrator references a sample essay written by a Psychology major, emphasizing the application of these principles.
• 03:00 - 03:30: Dietary Tips for Stress Reduction The chapter titled 'Dietary Tips for Stress Reduction' introduces the subject of using diet as a means to alleviate stress. The speaker mentions redoing documentation originally on an obsolete format to make it accessible, implying the importance of adapting to current standards for effective communication. A highlight is the mention of an ineffective approach to writing, particularly starting with a thesis that doesn't connect with the reader, indicating the significance of engaging the audience from the beginning. This sets the stage for exploring practical dietary strategies to manage stress.
• 03:30 - 04:00: Transition Words and Their Importance The chapter delves into the significance of using transition words in speech, highlighting the importance of grabbing the audience's attention. It uses examples like TED Talks and television speakers to illustrate how an effective attention getter can engage the audience. It suggests that engaging the audience is crucial because the typical attention span is short, emphasizing the need for speakers to be compelling from the start.
• 04:00 - 04:30: Paper Structuring with Real-life Examples The chapter titled 'Paper Structuring with Real-life Examples' addresses the challenges of time management and unexpected stressors in daily life. The introduction uses the relatable example of being stuck in traffic to illustrate common, stress-inducing situations. Following this, the chapter defines stress, drawing on the insights of Donald Radcliffe, a writer known for his work on stress. This initial setup links real-life experiences with concept definitions to guide the reader through understanding how these examples relate to stress and its broader implications on work and scheduling.
• 04:30 - 05:00: The Importance of Topic Sentences This chapter discusses the critical role of topic sentences in building coherent and effective paragraphs. It reflects on how the body responds to threats or demands thought a stressful situation, emphasizing how topics must adapt to changing circumstances. It draws parallels to modern times, noting that changes are rapid and numerous threats exist, making clarity through topic sentences even more crucial in communication. Stress emerges as an unwanted byproduct of these demands, affecting people daily.
• 05:00 - 05:30: Lifestyle Changes to Manage Stress The chapter discusses how adopting lifestyle changes, particularly focusing on diet, mental outlook, and overall lifestyle, can lead to stress relief. It emphasizes the importance of shifting from an irregular diet to a healthy one as a primary step in reducing stress. The chapter hints at further guidance beyond just dietary changes, suggesting an actionable approach to managing stress without being overly prescriptive like assembling a machine.
• 05:30 - 06:00: The Role of Exercise in Stress Management The chapter discusses the role of exercise in managing stress. It emphasizes that the information provided is largely informational, with some guidance included. Transition words are highlighted for better understanding, though not all have been emphasized to avoid overwhelming the reader. The chapter provides practical advice, such as reducing caffeine intake, which is considered stress-inducing. The use of transition words is highlighted to aid in the comprehension of the material, though the focus is more on the content rather than overly stressing on these linguistic elements.
• 06:00 - 06:30: Time Management and Organization The chapter discusses the negative effects of excessive caffeine consumption, citing symptoms such as nervousness, insomnia, irregular heartbeats, and headaches. It recommends replacing caffeine-loaded drinks with water, milk, or decaffeinated beverages. The speaker shares personal habits, specifically, drinking decaffeinated drinks and chooses not to use contractions in sentence structure as noted in the provided transcript. It advises against completely eliminating caffeine from one's routine.
• 06:30 - 07:00: Building Vocabulary and Enhancing Writing The chapter focuses on dietary recommendations to build vocabulary and enhance writing. It discusses the effects of caffeine and suggests replacing caffeine with carbohydrates, as they can cause a beneficial chemical reaction in the body to fight stress. The chapter advises consuming breads, crackers, or bagels, while being mindful of calorie content.
• 07:00 - 07:30: Illustrating with Student Essays The chapter discusses various student essays that touch on the importance of vitamin C. It highlights different foods that are rich in vitamin C, including oranges, kiwi, potatoes, and cantaloupe. The student reflects on their personal experience of incorporating more of these foods into their diet, despite not liking some of them, such as tomatoes. There is also a mention of broccoli, although there is uncertainty about its vitamin C content. Additionally, the chapter notes that studies indicate that stress can deplete vitamin C levels in the body. The chapter uses these essays to illustrate broader nutritional advice and stress management.
• 07:30 - 08:00: Six Steps to Happiness and Process Writing The chapter emphasizes the importance of consuming vitamin C daily, as the body cannot store it. Vitamin C is beneficial not just for combating stress but also for warding off other health issues.
• 08:00 - 08:30: The Five Steps of Process Essay Writing The chapter discusses the role of positive thoughts in process essay writing. It emphasizes that positive thoughts help in driving out negative thoughts, enabling a person to focus on constructive and beneficial aspects. While acknowledging that it is not always easy to concentrate on good things, especially when faced with negative thoughts or situations, the narrative encourages looking at small blessings, such as appreciating the food in one's fridge, as a way to maintain positivity and motivation in writing.
• 08:30 - 09:00: Avoiding Common Mistakes in Process Essays This chapter addresses common pitfalls encountered when writing process essays and provides strategies for avoiding these mistakes. It emphasizes the importance of clarity and precision in describing each step of a process, ensuring the reader fully understands the necessary actions. Additionally, the chapter may draw parallels between maintaining a positive mindset—like appreciating the small things and not letting stress or negativity defeat you—to maintaining clarity and positivity in writing. The speaker exemplifies this by sharing personal insights on how music and intentional focus on the positive can help to prevent being overwhelmed by stress, which parallels maintaining focus and positivity in writing processes.
• 09:00 - 09:30: Examples of Different Types of Processes The chapter 'Examples of Different Types of Processes' discusses the importance of perspective when dealing with stress. It emphasizes considering whether the causes of stress are significant enough to warrant the distress they cause. It includes a personal example from the speaker’s life, where they ask themselves if the stressful situation is truly worth getting stressed over, suggesting that often these are minor exaggerations.
• 09:30 - 10:00: Analyzing the Surgical Process: The Knife This chapter focuses on analyzing the process of making decisions regarding tasks that require immediate action versus those that can be deferred. It notes the use of exaggerated language in communication that may lead to confusion about the urgency of tasks. The emphasis is on the importance of recognizing which tasks are critical and must be prioritized, and which can be postponed without significant repercussions.
• 10:00 - 10:30: The Complexity of the Human Body in Writing The chapter titled 'The Complexity of the Human Body in Writing' delves into how thoughts can lead to exaggerated stress. It suggests that while there could be more to be said on the matter, the focus remains on how lifestyle changes can significantly reduce stress levels. The chapter concludes with a discussion on the importance of adopting lifestyle changes to manage and decrease stress effectively.
• 10:30 - 11:00: Reflections on the Writing Process The speaker reflects on the writing process by emphasizing the therapeutic connection with nature. They mention enjoying stepping outside and appreciating a beautiful day, hinting at how nature's humor and hiking might provide inspiration and relaxation. Despite busy schedules, the importance of taking moments to appreciate the outdoors is highlighted.
• 11:00 - 11:30: Understanding the Life Cycle of Leaves This chapter discusses the beauty of colorful leaves during the fall season and how enjoying them can be a part of daily activities like walking or driving. Viewing leaves can offer a natural source of relaxation and a moment away from stress. Additionally, the chapter suggests incorporating simple physical activities, such as brisk walks, into routines can improve health without needing extensive effort like running a 10k.
• 11:30 - 12:00: Descriptive Writing and Natural Processes The chapter highlights the benefits of walking for improving energy levels and reducing stress. It challenges individuals entering the healthcare field to practice self-care by incorporating more walking into their daily routines. Practical tips include parking further away from buildings and opting to use stairs instead of elevators.
• 12:00 - 12:30: Techniques for Marking Books The chapter discusses different techniques for marking books. It emphasizes the importance and benefits of marking, such as helping people who are physically challenged use book reading as a form of mental exercise and stress relief. It suggests that managing time effectively, like using to-do lists, can help focus on essential tasks and reduce unwanted stress, paralleling the approach to effectively reading and marking books.
• 12:30 - 13:00: Dealing with Intellectual Arrogance in Education This chapter focuses on the importance of organization and planning to overcome intellectual arrogance in education. It highlights the effectiveness of using to-do lists and daily planners to manage tasks efficiently, reduce stress, and enhance productivity. The speaker shares personal strategies, like jotting down tasks for the day, week, and month, as a means to organize thoughts and actions effectively.
• 13:00 - 13:30: Summary and Closing Remarks This chapter discusses the importance of planning and organization, highlighted by an example from a classroom setting. A student admired a teacher's use of a planner to manage tasks and assignments. The narrator reflects on their own use of a daily planner to keep track of responsibilities and avoid unexpected stressful situations. The chapter emphasizes the benefits of having a structured plan to manage one's day effectively.

English 101: The Process Analysis Essay Continued Further Transcription

• 00:00 - 00:30 forget to do this resume my I want to start recording okay now now I can begin stress now I don't um typically like one word titles ladies and gentlemen but this one kind of works fairly well because of that exclamation point after it that's
• 00:30 - 01:00 what that's called exclamation point and so it becomes a complete thought known as an interjection I don't know if you know the parts of speech I was taught all parts of speech and I was taught different types of sentences and that is an injection it's not just stress it's stress and I'm going to repeat what I did at the end of the last class and then go into the paper and hopefully you'll get some ideas for your own paper but I want Miss bolski you're and all I
• 01:00 - 01:30 can't call all of your name right now um to look like it please do not single space because not only does it hurt my eyes you know and it does it's hard for me to make comments and I take off points because I asked you to double space it unwanted stress plagues people every day but by changing diet mental Outlook and the lifestyle this are good this is good advice right here stress relief May soon follow please note that stress will kill you if it's an excess
• 01:30 - 02:00 there's always stress there's always a certain amount of stress and there are different types of stress you didn't talk about the different types of stress but you want to manage it just like you want to manage your time changing a stressed person's IR regular diet that's the first point what you eat to a healthy one can reduce the amount of unwanted stress after changing transitional topic sentence the next paragraph please remember to indent you know after changing a person's diet
• 02:00 - 02:30 transitional topic sentence having a positive attitude you know can also lower stress finally transition word say I want transition words you know you need to have at least five transition words finally changing a person's lifestyle can decrease the amount of one wanted stress then restatement in the fifth paragraph I just want five you know in conclusion and increase in the
• 02:30 - 03:00 amount of stress can make a person miserable however that's the transition word right there by changing a person's diet mental Outlook and lifestyle stress can soon be minimized now I want to go to the sample essay that um she wrote a young lady she was a Psychology major I still remember her you she was a psych major um hope I put it on oh there it is way over there
• 03:00 - 03:30 okay stress you I retyped this whole thing so I could show it to you you know I have the original but I had it on overhead transparency and I can't you I don't have an overhead can't use it in this environment got a minute you know some of us struggled on paper number two I haven't read paper number three yet with attention getter so I'm just boom started with the thesis that is the worst way to start a paper because if I don't agree with what you're saying in your thesis or don't understand your thesis your whole paper suffers now of
• 03:30 - 04:00 course you want me to agree um and understand so you draw me in that's a standard technique if you watch television where there are good speakers delivering a TED Talk for example you know there's some sort of attention getter that will occur you know um because you have to you know get your audience you know to pay attention got a minute the answer for most people is no you know because you know when people
• 04:00 - 04:30 ask you for a minute they usually want an hour there's not enough time in the day to get schedule work done let alone coping with situations that pop up unexpectedly most people have been stuck see this an example here in the introduction in a traffic jam at some point in their life this experience as well as others cause unwanted stress now she's defining the term so we know what she's talking about you know after getting our attention Donald Radcliffe a writer on stress defin stress as and
• 04:30 - 05:00 this is a quote that's the source the body's response to a threat or demand arising from a new or changing situation now does that talk about our times or not yes it does because things are changing almost every minute it seems and there are threats out there many different types and demands you know so that's a good definition there unwanted stress thesis plagues people every day
• 05:00 - 05:30 but by changing diet mental Outlook and lifestyle stress relief May soon follow now diet is first changing a stressed person's irregular diet due to a healthy one can reduce the amount of unwanted stress so what you eat that'll help first then she tells us what to do you know now this is not a how to do it put a machine together you know uh type thing or put it together you know um from the first step to the
• 05:30 - 06:00 last step this is an informational as opposed to directional even though there's some directions provided notice how she uses transition words you know I used to ask students to underline transition words but I don't want to put too much burden on you I've actually underlined enough but um but I still want the transition words to be in there I should have bolded them first try reducing the amount of caffeine excessive caffeine is stress inducing
• 06:00 - 06:30 and causes C details nervousness insomnia irregular heart beats and headaches instead of caffeine loaded drinks what did she tell us to do drink more water milk or decaffeinated drinks which is what I do um no contraction notice how there's no contraction this is exactly as she typed it if there's a type one there I made it she didn't do not stop drinking caffeine all together eliminating caffeine from your
• 06:30 - 07:00 diet may have the same effect as consuming too much while reducing caffeine she tells us you know because when you take something away you need to add something to it she probably learned that in Psychology um while reducing caffeine load up on carbohydrates now be careful with the carbs now within reason I'm going to say carbohydrates cause a chemical reaction in your body that can help fight off stress eat plenty of breads crackers or Bagels just watchh the calorie content finally
• 07:00 - 07:30 see I would add more if I was writing paper finally try eating more oranges I've been doing that it helps Tomatoes I don't even like tomatoes but I eat them kiwi fruit potatoes and cantalope these fruits and vegetables contain vitamin C I probably would have thrown in broccoli in there but I don't think broccoli has vitamin C in it um Studies have shown that stress depletes vitamin C
• 07:30 - 08:00 and because the body cannot store vitamin C it is very important to consume it daily you and you can get you can word off a lot of things other than stress with vitamin c um after changing a person's diet having a positive attitude can also lower stress let's see what she says first thinking positively is key when it comes to managing stress think of stress as a challenge to conquer and overcome
• 08:00 - 08:30 positive thoughts what do they do Force negative thoughts out of a person's mind allowing her him too to concentrate on good things you know that's not easy to do you know I try to concentrate on good things whenever I start to feel a little distressed or or thinking why did that student write such a terrible paper or why don't they come to CL and all that kind of stuff you know I look in my fridge why because there's food in there you know that's a blessing not everyone
• 08:30 - 09:00 has food in their fridge you know that's the point you know I try to find the little things or or I listen to some music that's what I did last night that's why I'm in such a good mood right now you know I listen to some uplifting music you know um I refuse to be defeated you know there's a point I'm trying to make by stress you know because I don't think I don't naturally just go think positive I I can see the worst scenar scenario in everything thing you
• 09:00 - 09:30 know well anyway I thought I'd say that also when stress occurs is important to put it in perspective I like that sentence from her when I start to stress out over something you know uh personal example from her life I tend to ask myself is this really something I need to get all worked up over usually the things people stress over are minor exaggerations of thoughts that they feel they must should and have to follow
• 09:30 - 10:00 through on these key exaggeration words confuse people into thinking they have to do things right away and some things you do need to do right away so don't be confused here when actually the task is notice a good vocabulary unimportant and can be put off till later there's some things that can be put off till later you know not your homework maybe you know but there are some things that may qualify um examp exaggerated
• 10:00 - 10:30 thoughts bring on exaggerated unwanted stress I probably would have said a little bit more about that one but that's what she wrote finally last Point changing a person's lifestyle can decrease the amount of stress he or she is facing what can you do last Point lifestyle changes and they say little lifestyle Chang changes mean
• 10:30 - 11:00 a lot getting in touch with nature oh I love this sentence here is a great way to mellow out I've already pked my head outside the door you it's a beautiful day you know I am not suggesting I like her sense of humor hiping hiking Through The Great Outdoors you know even though that might not be a bad idea but tribes are every nature on the way to work you know if your time is compromised you know it's especially during this time of year I love viewing
• 11:00 - 11:30 the colorful leaves on the trees while I'm driving well you can enjoy the colorful leaves on the trees on a walk in addition to getting in touch with nature finding the time for some exercising you can see how she's using the presentations that I have done and incorporating them into this paper is a great way to get the body what moving away from stress it does not have to be a 10k run just a short brisk
• 11:30 - 12:00 walk is all it takes this is true folks to get the energy level rising and the stress level lowering you know because a lot of these threaten are threatening to go into health care how can you go into Healthcare and you don't take care of your own self try parking further away from the office or School building so the walk to the entrance is a longer distance just a little thing then once inside do not take the elevator there's an elevator in the buildings
• 12:00 - 12:30 that had because some people actually need it because they're physically uh challenged or in wheelchairs use the stairs as another way to exercise and I like this word trample some stress along with experiencing nature and exercising changing the way time is managed will allow a person to focus on what needs to be done and not The Unwanted stress start with a to-do list you know I have a to-do list it's right
• 12:30 - 13:00 here see that's my to-do list for today I find I get more done and achieve more when I work at to-do list write down what needs to be done in a day week and month organization is a great way to stay above stress research has proven that to be so for example I carry a daily planner and she did you know when I would put things on the board like my to-do plan
• 13:00 - 13:30 which you get all typed out and neat and everything but I'm scribbling all on the board she on the board she would whip out that planner and then pencil write down whatever was due on a particular day you know well I was impressed by that for example I'll carry a daily planner that contains all the odds and ends that I have to do for do every day I know what is coming and by having a planner I avoid most surprising stressful events how do you plan your
• 13:30 - 14:00 time you know you know how do you get things done how do you find time to go to The Writing Center how do you find time to get it in a Dropbox before the Dropbox closes out you know or a quiz that may close out you know I mean if you're gonna be if you plan to be a professional I don't care what you're doing part-time full-time quarter time job right now it doesn't compare you know because if it did you wouldn't be taking this course you'll be there and so therefore you
• 14:00 - 14:30 have a dream it's a place you want to go how you going to get there if you have no plan in conclusion an immense amount of stress can make a person miserable however by changing a person's diet mental Outlook this is the third page now going on to a fourth page and lifestyle stress can soon be minimized notice how she varies her work choice so you got to build your vocabulary how do you build your vocabulary somebody asked I heard somebody asked that it's called read that's what it's called and anytime
• 14:30 - 15:00 you come across a word you don't understand it's called dictionary or you or dictionary.com that's how you do it you know because the mind is picking it up you just have to realize it and use that you know you don't have to take 50 years to improve your writing you can do it now consuming less caffeine and more carbohydrates and vitamin C will lessen that's what she talked about the effects stress has on the body also with a
• 15:00 - 15:30 positive mental Outlook ins slight changes in people's Lifestyles stress can be reduced dramatically you know lessen minimize reduce that's how she varies her word choice usually what people stress over is something that is really not that really not important then she gives this wonderful example process wasin the process at the end I dread having to speak in front of a large group of people my palm sweat and my face blushed uncontrollably I have learned
• 15:30 - 16:00 however comma comma transition where that public speaking is not a big deal you know and it's a required course you know all of you will need to take it if you wish to get a degree from hack it's called Communications 101 before I give a speech I like to think of a comfortable place where I have been or a funny event I have witnessed she probably got taught that in that class by doing this I tend to loosen up a bit and relax stress affects everyone but it
• 16:00 - 16:30 depends on what people do about it see some people don't do anything about it when they get overtaken it is not good to ignore stress facing the problem will help in finding ways to get through stress that's her Clincher you know it's not the most exciting Clincher I've ever read but you know um that's a clincher um h now let me stop my
• 16:30 - 17:00 share and let me move forward here and yeah okay scrolling and that wasn't scrolling for me don't you just love technology now I want to move forward now um looking at my notes Here I got plenty of them I've had years of collecting ah okay I think I'm GNA do Miss Peach next I don't have her up
• 17:00 - 17:30 there on the screen here um I'm G to quickly leave that and move to my PDF and I want to look at how I put that up there sometimes I am my haste in I'm not ready for that yet I want this after I do miss Peach now test taking it's a process taking
• 17:30 - 18:00 the test I wish you could see the see the comic here how did you do on the test author you know you always ask that when you're in hallways school campus you know you ask how'd you do wonderfully here's the process he chose to do for the math test I sat down at the right desk see you need a space to get things done I held my pencil properly well now you need a computer add a nice clean sheet of paper now it's a computer screen I wrote neatly and
• 18:00 - 18:30 legibly what you do now is you click or you type yes but did you get the math problems right that's what he was asking what did he say I can only take one test at a time well well the answer to that is no he didn't get the math problems right what to consider in writing process essay well you got to decide what you're going to try to explain you know another paper I could possibly right is how to learn a foreign language
• 18:30 - 19:00 I I've learned at least two and sung in many more you know with choir you sing in different languages like Latin and fah and you know yes the name a few German French you know but I studied that throughout College I think I told somebody one of my students that I almost became a French teacher in the public schools you know all I all I need to do is one semester more and I would have probably been doing
• 19:00 - 19:30 that I decided to go into retail which wasn't a best thing to do at the time because I'm not in it now but then I went back to school to get my masters so I could teach at the community college why is it important who or what does the process affect are the different ways of doing the process there are things to consider so what are they who are the readers what knowledge do they need to understand the process what skills and Equipment are
• 19:30 - 20:00 needed these are questions uh to apply to whatever subject you're going to do going to um deal with how long does it take sometimes you need to tell us it's going to take two years is the outcome always the same well might be might not be how many steps are there in the process you might want to say there are a million steps if there are I'm just exaggerating why is each step important you want to tell the reader why as you tell them how U what difficulties
• 20:00 - 20:30 are involved as the dos and don'ts the don'ts actually the cautions how can they be overcome and then the next one any cautions need to be given does the process have definitions that need to be clarified she defined stress how do we know what she's talking about are there other Pro processes that are similar you know analogies can be used that's what she did with the speech you know how she handles speech uh uh reducing the stress
• 20:30 - 21:00 with that technique if needed tell what needs to be done or why something should be done okay process paper's often written in the second person you I prefer you to avoid it as much as possible that's hard for some people to do but I showed you sentences where it is avoided you know okay now not quite ready for this thesis even though it's on the screen I'll let it up there a while
• 21:00 - 21:30 um I'm really not ready for it yet but when I'm in a PDF I sort of stay there this might help you um discover a topic I'll get to that on the screen later following these steps a person can spend less for groceries you know what are your techniques for saving money on groceries in these days of inflation inflation hasn't gone away still around the above thesis we'll get the attention of anyone who
• 21:30 - 22:00 has to buy groceries we want to learn the steps so that we can save some money one of the most common types of writing is a type that tells readers how to do something or explains a sequence of events that lead to a particular outcome this type of writing is extremely valuable for readers because the reader is able to learn a lot of useful things such as uh write a resume a professional
• 22:00 - 22:30 resume how to apply for a job you know 21st century there's some new wrinkles how to invest wisely some people they like to spend spin spend spend SP debt Deb debt Deb debt you know but they don't know how to invest wisely so they can leave something behind when they leave this planet you anyway Legacy how to invest wisely how to buy
• 22:30 - 23:00 the right car a lot of people buy cars there in the right one you how to shop for clothes just name a few now you may have read a lot of directions mine included and it may have been confusing well you want to make it easy to understand you're the expert you you you get to
• 23:00 - 23:30 choose let's apply this to the so-called real world the writer is to share information when writing a process essay for example a scientist a scientist will explain his or her methods and procedures so that other what what what scientists can reproduce those steps and get the same results you know they publish their
• 23:30 - 24:00 findings you know and if it doesn't work the reputation well there isn't going to be one not a good one a professional photographer may explain a simple means of developing pictures so that other people may develop their own pictures at home you an avid Rose breeder May describe how high hybrids are created wish we
• 24:00 - 24:30 were on campus in springtime because in the back of the lman art center roses hybrid roses and Aid Rose breeder May describe how hybrids are created so that Rose lovers can understand and appreciate the complexity of the process even though they may not ever create hybrids themselves they just want to understand the process so are the professionals and an application to
• 24:30 - 25:00 process analysis now I'm going to look at this now it comes later in my plan but I'm gon look at this uh thesis statement to refresh your memory um before I serve you some happiness cake you know um each one's GNA get a slice of Happiness cake well there are three skills you must master from a student see I I I let students show you the way you know and I
• 25:00 - 25:30 add to it you know remember they didn't have these examples I'm showing you because they hadn't written them yet you know and so you have an advantage but yet they were able to figure it out without all the helps that you're getting and I bombard you with text because I want you to see how words are spelled I want you to see how sentences are put together there are three you must Master to use a fire extinguisher properly and
• 25:30 - 26:00 effectively you know he wrote a whole paper on this you would think it would be boring I went out and got me a fire extinguisher as reading this paper these three skills consist of knowing when to use a fire extinguisher how to operate one how to operate a fire extinguisher excuse me and recognizing when the fire is put out properly he has a plan of development too transition words first now the first skill one was Master
• 26:00 - 26:30 before even picking up a fire extinguisher is knowing when to use a fire extinguisher so a little repetitive but he wrote a very good paper and when to get out of the building you know because fire does not play with you you know it will take you out the second skill you must know when using a fire extinguisher is how to operate it then he he gets into real nitty-gritty and would do first second third and that particular par transitional topic sentence once you
• 26:30 - 27:00 have extinguished a fire where the fire extinguisher is empty you will need to determine if the fire is truly out see he was a um um a firefighter you know he was working on getting a degree degree in it instead of just volunteering you know and so he knew this I said how do you know all this when I read his paper he said well I teach it to people in the community in conclusion knowing how to use a fire extinguisher can be a very useful life saving skill that requires this is a
• 27:00 - 27:30 restatement recognition of how to use one knowing how to operate one and knowing when the fire is extinguished you know it's very clear that's what we want we want clear you we don't want you to confuse the reader with a mangled sentence or a lot of verbiage you know I'm not impressed by that neither is anyone who reads you know once you master the language guess
• 27:30 - 28:00 what then you can get fancy I said I wanted to serve some some cake now this is called Happiness cake we dealt with um six steps to happiness the last time from Ant Grace 10 secrets of success things you can do to feel good about yourself all that that was by Design I like that material but it also teaches I'm musing a teach process now I
• 28:00 - 28:30 didn't come up with this I I have a document that I found this um well I found it in a something I had been reading um and I just recopied it for the sake of this H presentation this morning four cups of love this is happiness cake for a relationship you know some people they kind of you know have problems in
• 28:30 - 29:00 their relationships this is a marital relationship here four cups of love three cups of understanding four tablespoons of flat fullness three teaspoons of helpfulness I like how they put it in the form of a recipe add appropriate amounts of work and play you know in the relationship season with security and mutual planning some people leave that out place in a pan well greased with a sense
• 29:00 - 29:30 of humor top it off with a thick coating of true spirituality when the cake is done serve on a platter of friendliness garnish with smiles H I think I need a punctuation mark there I'm going to put it in there right now if I can find find it there we go
• 29:30 - 30:00 that's been bothering me um I don't want to teach runon sentences anyway let me go to my next tidbit the process essay five steps this is on the quiz this stuff here because the quiz goes through process um five steps right process essay and five things to
• 30:00 - 30:30 avoid in writing a process essay overview that's the first step in writing process I said what does that mean uh your introduction your introductory paragraph where you introduce the process and you plan to develop it after your attention get or an opening remarks you give give an overview special term special terms are defined like she defined stress for
• 30:30 - 31:00 example I don't know what your topics are going to be um you know you you you explain your special terms describe them you know one of uh one of my students is planning to write on Lacrosse how to play lacrosse but what's that you I don't play lacrosse do I look like I play lacrosse you know and so I I asked her to um describe it a little bit
• 31:00 - 31:30 just a little bit you know give us some idea you know so I can come away with understanding the gang because it'll be over my head you know um I'm sure there are other terms that go with that particular sport that I hope that she will describe or clarify or explain or Define but special terms need to be handled carefully because you're writing to the novice you know you're writing to a person who does not have the level of expertise that you do sequence of steps governed by the plan
• 31:30 - 32:00 of development you know whether you're going to do directional type paper I've shown you mostly informational type and most people tend toward the directional type you know which is okay just a directional can be boring if if you don't have examples you know and details that's number four and the results what do I end up with well after you know going
• 32:00 - 32:30 dealing with stress I should end up relaxed if I follow uh the ideas the tips the advice we need to know what the results are going to be what you end up with I've said that in several different ways avoid omitting steps you know the ones that are absolutely essential you know you're not writing a 50 page B chapter of a book you're writing a five par essay two to four double space
• 32:30 - 33:00 typewritten Pages you know and so therefore you want to pick the most significant steps that the reader needs in order to follow the process even if they're never going to do it themselves reversing steps see order is important writing a process essay don't get the steps out of order you know now the re reader um you wonder how can the reader
• 33:00 - 33:30 know that they don't know the process well they're going to know something you know you can tell when something is sort of reversed you know suspending steps that's a way of not completing the step in other words you talk about it but you don't complete what the reader needs to do it's sort of hanging in midair you know you know you youget to tell the reader um who is fishing um to reel in the fish you know I mean they do it's in
• 33:30 - 34:00 the water the fish is biting now what do I do you didn't tell them suspending step overlooking steps within steps I call these the itty bitty steps that you just do um not even thinking you know but the reader needs to know those steps you know overlooking steps within steps and confusing steps in other words you want to WR clear sentences you don't want to
• 34:00 - 34:30 confuse the reader overview special terms I invite you to take notes um sequence of steps examples results avoid omitting steps reversing steps suspending steps overlooking steps with in steps and confusing steps I already went over this one you know I didn't want to wait I retyped it the fire extinguisher thing
• 34:30 - 35:00 you know so I can move on to the next one different types of process you see different types and this might give you some ideas I don't know natural process on the quiz just on the quiz mechanical process natural mechanical physical and mental there are different types of processes natural anything to do with nature I put birth up there mechanical anything that has to do
• 35:00 - 35:30 with machines you know how they work and I put cognition up there that's a very complex process you know to try to explain to someone who you know all they want to do is just put the key and move um physical process there anything that has to do with the body physical process you know anything that has to do with the body mental
• 35:30 - 36:00 process anything that has to do with the mind now physical I the examples dancing mental an example is writing writing is a mental process you know that's how it begins anyway before it becomes physical now before it becomes physical five functions of the process and again I invite you to take notes I know boring to take notes but I invite you to take
• 36:00 - 36:30 them anyway you know one day you'll thank me probably 20 years from now but anyway um divides into individual steps you know you're going to divide it governed by the plan of development I do want that plan of development in there you know you know you're just labeling each of the major body paragraph of that process analysis don't forget the analysis essay dividing the individual steps explains
• 36:30 - 37:00 the movement that's what you're supposed to be doing explains the movement of the process in five paragraph so you got to focus that's another thing I teach is focus some all over the place writing about everything but the topic interprets the function of each step gives directions no directions are part of it provides information you know so more or less combined the
• 37:00 - 37:30 two you know provides information so devising the individual steps I'm repeating explains the movement of the process uhhuh interprets the function of each step that's interprets you know that's the analysis explain and interprets gives directions as appropriate of course but what makes it most interesting I believe is provides information the
• 37:30 - 38:00 purpose twofold twofold to give information and directions that's the purpose to give information and directions I'm going to deal with the knife the essay by Dr Richard szer which deals with surgery these are my major notes Here which I'm going to watch my time carefully because I'd like to get as far as humanly possible deals
• 38:00 - 38:30 with surgery you know it's surgery on a woman oh oops I got a little hit of myself he he uses words of color he describes the organ systems that he actually sees and their color just to make it interesting he's not writing to medical students he's writing to the average person so they can appreciate the miracle of the human body and he takes us on a journey use of color maroon he mentions salmon and yellow uh he he mentions the
• 38:30 - 39:00 liver and Compares it to a dark Sun the pink stomach you know on the inside we all the same for the most part you know people focus so much on the outside that sometimes get into trouble intestines he Compares them to snakes that have just been fed then he takes us through the process
• 39:00 - 39:30 within this process the priest and the doctor are compared in the process they go through to become doctors are priest vows they take vows training Long training they sacrifice a lot more than you can even imagine and fatigue is part of the package he mentions the word womb so we know it's a woman see patient is a woman he mentions the word
• 39:30 - 40:00 ovaries and what he finds cancer in the colon colon cancer and they keep revising when you ought to get the test the colonoscopy you know it used to be well when you're 50 you know but some people need to do so they say now in their 40s and those uh uh uh who have a lot in their family you know have colon cancer in the family they might want to start
• 40:00 - 40:30 in their late 30s you because once the symptoms come it's a little late you know but they can do a lot for it if they discover it earlier because then they do it right then they remove the polyp I know a little bit about these things just a little bit of course I've been teaching this a while now um I'm trying to think where do I want to oh I
• 40:30 - 41:00 know I bought the knife here if I can find it okay there it is Richard uh oh oh I clicked it off I didn't mean to do that now I gotta go find it again oh dear well I'll find it again
• 41:00 - 41:30 I clicked wrong don't you just love technology you know one of these days it'll on voice command it'll do what I tell it Richard sells with the knife there it is on the thingy yeah now I always like to walk through it I don't have a whole lot of time because I want to get a couple more things so I'm going to move somewhat quickly I'm not going to do all of it because well you can
• 41:30 - 42:00 read it but I want to at least do the introduction one holds a knife as one holds the bve of cello or tulip by the stem he's talking about the knife but it's actually about surgery not Palm nor grip nor grass but lightly with the tips of the fingers the knife is not for pressing it is for the drawing across the fill of skin like a slender fish it waits at the ready then go it darts followed by fine that's the
• 42:00 - 42:30 blood wake of red the flesh Parts falling away to Yellow globules of fat even now after so many times I still Marvel at its power gleaming silent more I am struck with the kind of dread that it is I in whose hand the blade travels that my hand is his vehicle that yet again this terrible still belly thing and I this is the thesis have conspired for a most unnatural purpose they're laying open of
• 42:30 - 43:00 the body of the human being and you can see some of the words and I clamp Spong suure do he takes us on a journey deeper still and he mentioned some structures within the parum pink and gleaming and me membranous bges into the wound you know see you put you put under anesthesia and all that other stuff otherwise you be screaming it gra it is grasp with
• 43:00 - 43:30 forceps and open this hasn't changed for the first time we see into the cavity of the abdomen now that's a fragment there don't y'all do that such a Primitive Place one expects to find drawings of buffalo on walls you know like cave drawings the sense of trespassing is Keener now heightened by the world's light Illuminating the organs their secret colors reveal maroon salmon and yellow remember my notes my outline I want to
• 43:30 - 44:00 move down a little bit um oh here the teses it laps over the pink sweep of the stomach well the momentum he mentions the momentum I don't know where that is but I know it's in that paragraph because momentum is like a blanket I learned that from Dr Oz an arc of the liver shines high and on the right like a dark Sun it laps over the pink sweep of the stomach from whose border the here it is um lower border the gazy omum that's very important
• 44:00 - 44:30 structure is draped and through which Veil one SE senu as slow as just fed Stakes the indoline coils of the intestine I got to do this paragraph yeah I got time I must confess the Priestess of my profession has ever been impressed on me in the beginning that should be a v there there are vows taken with all solemnity the priest takes vows and so does the doctor doctor be
• 44:30 - 45:00 hypocritic oath the priest one of the vows would be Chastity poverty oh another one obedience that's what the that's the vows the benedictines take I teach the in my Humanities class um then process was in the process there's the endless har no VI of training much fatigue much sacrifice at last one emerges a celebrate you know you graduate standing
• 45:00 - 45:30 close to the truth lying curtain in the ark you've heard of the Ark of the Covenant Arc of the body the truth for the priest the truth is the word scripture you know the truth for the doctor is that body that they're working with not sir police and COK that's what the priest wears they're called the clerical vestments but mask and gown that's what the doctor wear or your regalia use a very interesting word for
• 45:30 - 46:00 that you hold no chalice that's the cup that the priest holds and blesses and becomes part of the Eucharist or communion service but a knife that's what the doctor holds there is no wine that's what goes into the Chalice for the priest no wafer that's what the priest deals with the body of Christ broken they are the facts only the facts of
• 46:00 - 46:30 blood and flesh now this is very rich one of the richest passages I've ever dealt with then he goes further and further gives us some warnings like no no right there don't touch the do not touch the spleen no contraction there that LS below the left Leaf of the diaphragm a man in the coral cave his bloody tongue protruding one poke in aite rupture exploding into with sudden Hemorrhage the filmy momenta must not be torn you know because you do these things the patient ain't going to be in trouble one poke in my rupture exploding
• 46:30 - 47:00 with sudden Hemorrhage the filum must not be torn the intestine scraped or denuded the hand finds the liver palms and fingers running along and sharp lower Edge admiring here are the twin mouths of the kidneys the apron of the momentum hanging in front of the intestinal coils one lifts it aside and the fingers dip among Loops searching mapping territory establishing boundaries deeper still in the womb and his ear likee appendages that over how they do Nestle in the cup of a man's hand their power all dormant their
• 47:00 - 47:30 Frailty itself then he goes further on I'm GNA try to do a little bit more of it the stomach is okay greater curvature clean no sign of ulcer pyloris dadum fine see some of you going to healthcare you have to know every one of these structures now comes a gallbladder no Stones right kidney left all right liver uh-oh your speech lowers to a whisper stops for a long long moment then picks up again at the end of a side that comes through your mass like a last breath three here
• 47:30 - 48:00 what he finds three big hard ones on the left Lo one on the right metastatic you never want to hear that that means it is spread deposit bad bad where's the primary got to be coming from somewhere you know the arm shifts Direction and the fingers drop lower and lower into the pelvis the body impaled now upon the arm of the surgeon to the hilt of the elbow here it is two in the sigmoid colon wrapped around it
• 48:00 - 48:30 all around it pretty tight we'll take a sleeve of the bow no colostomy not that anyway but God there's a lot of it down there here you take a feel you know then it goes on and and finishes you can read the rest of that so forth and so on you know it's very in my view very dramatic that particular process now I want to get to another one of the essays those are essays folks you know sometimes students not sure what an
• 48:30 - 49:00 essay is from subject strategy that is now oh got to put on the screen here there's what that's what he's talking about you know the you can see the stomach the liver the gallbladder the large intestine another structures of the digestive system which is what he's
• 49:00 - 49:30 talking about there why leaves change color in Fall I'm not g to do as much with that one unless I can find five minutes to walk you through a little bit of it um these are my notes from the piece by diac sunlight she tells us rules most living things in the days short been doing that quite a while you know she
• 49:30 - 50:00 explains when the process begins summer solstice in June is when the process really begins we just don't notice it until we see a leaf changing color the leaves are choked off essentially in this process this natural process she talks about chlorofil yeah that's what makes the least green y'all you know is the chlorophyll you know uh and when the sunlight hits the chlorophyll it looks
• 50:00 - 50:30 green to our eyes she tries to expl she explains that photosynthesis something that uh you you may already know because you're taking science stops you see um trees deciduous trees evergreen trees they always green deciduous trees make their own food you then a process called photosynthesis and therefore the tree drops the leaves this on the quiz too the nice on
• 50:30 - 51:00 the quiz too chlorophyll breaks down and then she tells us some information about where the best colors can be found China in the northeastern United States where we reside you know they call them foliage tours where people come from all over just to see the leaves on the trees then she mentioned some of the substances like anthocyanin which is a sugar that causes the red color she mentions the word catenoids it's not like words so does
• 51:00 - 51:30 she yellow color in the leaves that's catenoid fall she tells where the word comes from uh uropean language you know there was essentially one language on the earth uh and then Old English Old English would be fallen Indo European fall then she you know goes a little bit further spring you know shows how the words were spring up things spring up up in spring summer we simmer the Heat
• 51:30 - 52:00 Winter we wind because of the cold and as the leaf ages the hormone there's a hormone in the leaf the leaf is complex oxin Fades that's what it's called oxin and the cells you can't see them divide as they react with water why leaves change color in the fall uh and they come apart you know
• 52:00 - 52:30 those cells and it's hanging the leaf those that are still hanging by a few threads and she uses the word xylm and all that is needed is a light Breeze you have these Breezy days you know nature knows what she's doing and the leaves come airborn and they fall to the ground why leaves change color in
• 52:30 - 53:00 default there's a leaf see the leaf is complex you know and I Marvel at the leaf you know I Marvel at living things you know um the xylm that's mentioned there I had to learn this in biology in 11th grade you know and we had to um take a leaf we'd have to to to Market all these parts I had to go online because I can't show you what I had in my hand here anyway upper uh oh the um I
• 53:00 - 53:30 want to mention xylm um food conducting tissue no I got that wrong let's see xylm water conducting tissue of vascular plants xylm water conducting tissue um flum which he doesn't mention food conducting tissue of vascular plants and then you can see the cuticle the upper epida lower epidermis the sto we had to learn all that guard sales in 11th grade
• 53:30 - 54:00 um I still remember Miss Bowser you know and so forth and so on this is like the cellular view of a leaf ain't that nothing you know um the beauty of the earth overwhelming I want to spend a minute U come on oh right there let me not click off it Dr Diane aaman um she also is a poet
• 54:00 - 54:30 um and she does lots of writing and she um was at hack reading her poetry I was there I'm just gonna do a little bit of this maybe about three minutes about all I have time for because I got two more essays to do and I'm not gonna be able to do both of them today anyway I want to get at least to the next one the strength of autumn Catches Us catches one unaware that's her attention get that's her attention get
• 54:30 - 55:00 her was that a gold finch perching in the early morning early September Woods or just see question the first Le uh first Turning Leaf a Redwing Blackbird or sugar maple closing up shop for the winter keeni as leopards We Stand still and squint hard looking for signs of movement early morning Frost is heavily on the grass and turns barbed wire into a string of stars notice the analogy and the
• 55:00 - 55:30 description on a distant Hill a small square of yellow appears to be a lighted stage at last she says the same words that he does rich just SS her the truth Dawns on us it's so like a process fall is staggering in right on schedule with his baggage of chili M nights maob holidays Halloween and spectacular heart stop inly beautiful leaves soon the leaves will start
• 55:30 - 56:00 cringing on the trees and roll up and clinch fists before they actually fall off she's always told told us the process then she explains the process dry seed pods will rattle like tiny gours but first there will be weeks of gushing color so bright so pastel so confetti likee it's almost a similar sentence to much sacrifice much fatigue you know the repetition that people will travel up and down the East Coast just to stare at it a whole season of leaves then she
• 56:00 - 56:30 mentions when it begins June 21st summer solers right there that's why it catches us unaware a Turning Leaf stays partly green at first then reveal splotches of color in red as a chlorophyll gradually breaks down that's what we're talking about my notes see dark green seems to stay longest in the veins outlining and defining them during the summer chlorophyll dissolves in the heat and light but it's being steadily replaced see when that stops then you see the
• 56:30 - 57:00 true color of the Le you know Northeastern United States in Eastern China has the most spectacular range of Fall Foliage that's where it occurs on the geographically speaking then she mentions the different types of trees and the different types of colors that are are known that trees Old English Fallen which means to fall Indo-European that language that just about everybody spoke at one time fall you know then she talks about the other thing the other Seasons that I mentioned
• 57:00 - 57:30 in my notes that I share with you um I'm G to do the last paragraph and run out of time here at last the leaves leave what a wonderful sentence that is but first they turn color and thrill us for weeks on end you know process again then they Crunch and crackle underf foot they sh as children drag their feet small feet through these he along the curve dark slimy mats of leaves cling to one's heels after rain a damn
• 57:30 - 58:00 stuckle likee morar of semide decayed leaves protects the tender shoots the process continues with a roof until spring and makes a rich humus and occasional balls or Ripple in the leafy Mounds signals of shrew or a filled Mouse tunneling out of sight you know they'll tunnel into your house too sometimes one finds INF fossil Stones the imprint of a leaf long since
• 58:00 - 58:30 disintegrated whose outlines remind us how detailed vibrant and Alive are the things of this Earth that perish you know the entire life cycle is dealt with there well you know writing can be very dramatic when it's well done now I want to get to one more thing today I'm not going to walk this is in
• 58:30 - 59:00 the textbook how to Mark a book by Dr Mortimer Adler and all I'm going to do is share how to do that the process I'm just going to do the process piece and there are questions on the quiz on this item marking a book is an act of love when you write all over it you know it's your book you can write all over see it's kind of hard to do that in a remote environment when you got a screen I guess you can sort of make markings on
• 59:00 - 59:30 things but it's not the same he says fill the pages with notes see the man was still active in his into his 90s lived nearly 100 years Dr M rler calleded the University of Chicago and this is his classic 1940 essay send your textbook how to Mark a book marking a book is active love
• 59:30 - 60:00 filled pages with notes actively read the book actively some people are so passive that's why they don't remember a single thing they've read and there are seven methods I invite you to take notes again but you can get them right out of the the article in the book of the essay in the book underlining I've done all these methods before I knew that was in an article vertical lines at the margins you know vertical
• 60:00 - 60:30 lines when you're standing you're vertical um star star information important stuff or asterisks that's how I read everything numbers in the margin you know you number points you can do that yourself a lot of texts do it for you Circle stuff I did that too even in my notebooks wish I could show it to you I can't because you know you wouldn't be able to see it in this remote
• 60:30 - 61:00 environment be so small writing in the margin you know the space on the page he recommends it or at the top or bottom of the page outline the book you know on a separate piece of paper if you don't want to mark up your books but it's more fun to mark up the book or use a scratch Pad you know to write down notes if you prefer write in what you feel he says
• 61:00 - 61:30 speak to the book oh I skipped a sentence there there is no set speed everyone thinks oh I got to be a speed reader no you don't just give yourself enough time to get through it he was applying this applying this to the classics the great books but you can um apply it to anything in print that you end up reading do not lend it out you know he was telling and that and the simple reason is
• 61:30 - 62:00 because you won't get it back you if it's a good book and then some people forget any who I'm gonna try to do one more thing I'm gonna try then I'll be almost where I want to be campus racism 101 like Nikki say I have a book see the picture Same by Nikki Giovani professor niiki giavon she's still living 1943 to still living distinguished Professor I'm
• 62:00 - 62:30 GNA go a few minutes over I beg your Indulgence I won't charge you um she's she's a distinguished professor at Virginia Tech in blackb blackburg Virginia she gives I this is my I subtitled it tips for overcoming intellectual aggregant you know because some professors really are I try not to be and she gives her students a process to be successful in huge universities
• 62:30 - 63:00 you know where the professor thinks they know more than everybody on the earth go to class oh let me let me quickly go through this meet your professors you know is this good you know you can do this uh at any institution of Higher Learning um that that's her face there and that's my University slippy Rock University that's that's that's what that picture is go back to see your professor I did oh I forgot number three do assignments on time you know she
• 63:00 - 63:30 explains every one of these things I'm just going to present the seven methods of the process for overcoming campus racism understand that there are professors who do not like you she was telling those students who felt they were being treated poorly you know we don't have to like you but we do surely have to be fair and teach you don't defeat yourself you don't have to like me either to learn but don't defeat yourself number six and number seven
• 63:30 - 64:00 participate in some campus activity you know you can do it remotely get involved in some way shape or form your job I'm moving quickly is to get an education that's your job should be your first priority top priority education is a personal concern don't be worried about everybody else you know you're going to work to do what you need to do she also said and I'm moving quite
• 64:00 - 64:30 quickly I and I might go back to it again too bad ignorance isn't painful a lot of people would be hurting if it were but they hurt later in their Futures mentally audience her immediate audience was African-American students this is a predominantly white institution that she teaches at she she got criticism for that you know 10 your professor her position
• 64:30 - 65:00 temply typically all students need a plan to overcome racism oh yes it's there I've been teaching this for Years everybody act like it just started last week sexism ladies still occurs and intellectualism that's a term I came up with because those are people who will say I'm smart and you're not and you never will be you know now that you got the quick version and I'm going to have to say
• 65:00 - 65:30 goodbye because I have a class immediately after this one I can take one quick question if there is one because I you know something may be beating about in your head and and you want to do it now instead of in an email later well okay U I've gone a little bit over I try not to do no more than five minutes and I'm almost there so anyway um we won't see you until um next Monday
• 65:30 - 66:00 will I finish up process then I'm going to move into comparison and contrast folks so come up with a topic email me what you come up with and then start working on it have a wonderful day good to see you all bye bye thank you see you miss gagno oh I heard a voice thank youe thank you oh miss Goss take care of yourself now um Mor take care Professor
• 66:00 - 66:30 Mr Hoy you always say goodbye I appreciate it um I have a question oh what did I miss like the last like five minutes I had to help my my brother open up a quizzes for his school oh okay I understand um I went over Nikki giovan's uh piece and I may we go over it again um campus racism 101 okay and I did that really quick so
• 66:30 - 67:00 all right you have a recording right yes it won't be up it won't be up until the weekend though okay oh no I'm it's gonna be up on Thursday okay all right you're welcome Miss Solomon and Miss Beck Lans I better go to my next class